Scene Re-Write

      Indoor Scene    

  Bedroom Scene    

    Kitchen Scene    

    Outdoor Scene    

1.   

In this scene, the main character (Eleanor) is sitting on her bed, scribbling something onto a notepad.

From another angle, we again see her scribbling however this zooms in to show that the note says 'Death'

2.   

After a title, Eleanor is then shown scribbling a boys name, until she receives a phone call.

Another shot will show a close up of the phone call from an ex boyfriend, which is when Eleanor will then pick up the phone, and reject the call.

We will then return back to the original shot, where she rips out the page she was writing the boys name on, scrunches it up, and throws it across the room. 

Another title will then be shown. 

After the title, Eleanor is shown ripping an image of her and her boyfriend together dramatically.

3.   

Following the previous two events, Eleanor is then seen crying into her pillow, the shot then moves to her in the mirror, wiping the make-up from underneath her eyes.

Another title is shown.

4.   

After the bedroom scenes, Eleanor will be shown making her way across several rooms and stair cases to reach the kitchen, using a variety of shots and angles.

Once in the kitchen, Eleanor will search through the cupboards in search of something, we then see that she is searching for a bottle of vodka which she takes from the last cupboard she looks within.

We will then perform a close up shot of Eleanor pouring herself a shot of this drink which in yet another shot, she will quickly drink, and slam down to show her distress.

5.   

Next, Eleanor sill be sitting on a window ledge, on the phone to a friend discussing the break-up. Again, her phone rings, and a close up shot of her phone is shown, as the calls ends and shows a large amount of missed calls.

 6. 

From outside of the front door, the second character, Ellie, is shown trying to knock on the door of Eleanors house.

After scene 7, we return to this scene where we see Ellie on the phone to someone unknown, telling them that Eleanor isn't answering the door and she is worried.

 7.

In between the scenes of 6, Eleanor is shown in a separate room, playing music loudly so that she is unable to hear any knocks at the door.

 8.   

After the previous two scenes, Eleanor is shown leaving the room she is in, through the kitchen and up the stairs before eventually returning to her room, where she sits on the window seat and opens up the window.

Another shot from outside of the window will then show eleanor looking out.

 9. 

From downstairs, we suddenly see foot steps from an unknown being coming up the stairs.

From behind them, a shot is shown of the front door swinging open.

10. 

The final scene, is shot from outside the bedroom window, and shows eleanor hanging from the window, unconscious, or dead, when a hand comes from behind a curtain and drags her away.