Re-Write of Scenes

Characters: 

Lina: Playing 'Chloe' ( ex-best friend )

Bella: Playing 'Jocasta'

Millie: Playing another victim

Savanna: Playing shower scene victim

Jo: Playing main character/victim

 1) Savanna is running up the track away from the camera

Dashboard and window filming from inside the car

 2) Jo and Lina are walking together towards the camera 

merged with 3) Jo and ex-bestfriend are walking towards the camera having fun

^ These scenes will have a fade out fade in transition as half way through scene 2 it will merge into scene 3 to convey the idea that new friend has took Lina's place.  

 4) Lina knocks on Jo's door, to find Jo and new best friend, once Lina sees Jo has company, she quickly feels replaced and laeves without an explanation.

 5) Over the shoulder filiming of Lina recieving a message from new best friend followed by a close up of their conversation.

 6) Jo is shown putting up missing posters in the streets - misleading the audience to think that Lina is the antagonist when infact it is the new best friend.

 7) Lina and Savanna are in Lina's bedroom. Lina leaves the room to get them both a drink. Savanna innocently opens up Lina's draw to find a group photo of their friends, with some faces crossed out, and Jocasta's face is circled. The group image has a sharp knife laying over the top of it.

^ this leads to scene  8) Savanna is suspicious and scared, so asks to use the bathroom to call friends and explain whats happened. Whilst Savanna is in the shower, the door opens and a knife is seen, as Lina appears to be the only other person in the house, audiences will assume she is about to kill Savanna.

9) Savanna is shown killed in the shower

10) Millie and Savanna are conversing in woodland area.

11) Mid-conversation, A hand grabs Millie and drags her to the floor. However the killer remains unseen.

12) Lina is seen running towards a car in distress, she gets inside the car complaining about how no one will listen to her.

13) Lina is grabbed from someone in the back of the car.

14) The scene of Savanna at the start is repeated.

Titles will be shown before, after and between these scenes.

     Brooke Weston     
    Weldon